Sunday, May 04, 2008

Insubstantial

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Insubstantial

Like the moans of the wind, like the reasons for sin,
Just here and its gone, like a flickering song,

Insubstantial,

Like the marks on the wall, of a pain too close,
To the bone, to recall

Insubstantial,

Like the fear of defeat
Holding you back on a lingering leash

8 comments:

  1. Very substantial ;)

    Nice. it was sort of *weird* to hear, but cool...give me some time. :))))) I will give birth and everythign will sound just fine

    :))

    Pregnant Man :)

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  2. :D D: Yeah?? ... Ok I am willing to wait :D... You are too kind mdea, dis is why I love blogging, I can inflict my weird whims on unsuspecting victims ... Hey dat rhymed :D

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  3. madhuri? how do you do that? time and again? small piece with stark beauty...

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  4. Antigone, thank you darling!! You're the first one to say that about this piece :D!!! Damn, Im all emo :((

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  5. Yay!! I finally get to see my Madhuri!!
    *hugs*

    "Like the marks on the wall, of a pain too close,
    To the bone, to recall"

    You find poetry in the darnest images!
    *awed!*

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  6. Mackie, thanks darling :) !!
    I try, not too hard I suspect :((...

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  7. Shoo! Don't be so ultra modest now! You're G.O.O.D!!!!

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  8. Chee... Modest... N I was thinking G.O.D at first sight :D :D ... Thanks babe, dat alwayz helps, alwayz!!

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