Insubstantial
Like the moans of the wind, like the reasons for sin,
Just here and its gone, like a flickering song,
Insubstantial,
Like the marks on the wall, of a pain too close,
To the bone, to recall
Insubstantial,
Like the fear of defeat
Holding you back on a lingering leash
Sharanya Manivannan – Long Bio
11 months ago
Very substantial ;)
ReplyDeleteNice. it was sort of *weird* to hear, but cool...give me some time. :))))) I will give birth and everythign will sound just fine
:))
Pregnant Man :)
:D D: Yeah?? ... Ok I am willing to wait :D... You are too kind mdea, dis is why I love blogging, I can inflict my weird whims on unsuspecting victims ... Hey dat rhymed :D
ReplyDeletemadhuri? how do you do that? time and again? small piece with stark beauty...
ReplyDeleteAntigone, thank you darling!! You're the first one to say that about this piece :D!!! Damn, Im all emo :((
ReplyDeleteYay!! I finally get to see my Madhuri!!
ReplyDelete*hugs*
"Like the marks on the wall, of a pain too close,
To the bone, to recall"
You find poetry in the darnest images!
*awed!*
Mackie, thanks darling :) !!
ReplyDeleteI try, not too hard I suspect :((...
Shoo! Don't be so ultra modest now! You're G.O.O.D!!!!
ReplyDeleteChee... Modest... N I was thinking G.O.D at first sight :D :D ... Thanks babe, dat alwayz helps, alwayz!!
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